buzz: to whisper; gossip(one of the meanings)
Everyone is buzzing with the beautiful star, ' Patty Hou ', who was a famous journalist, now she is a TV host and probably will get married after several months later.
Here I would like to desribe a person using a few sentences, but I think I need to modify it still because I am not good at desribing it smoothly. Please help me if available.
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Hi Maggie,
ReplyDeleteI actually lived in Germany when I was younger. That is why I chose it as my foreign language in school. I do live in the U.S. I live in the state of Minnesota.
About your sentence:
The phrase "after several months later" should be instead "in a couple of months. This is because the phrase "after several months later" is in past tense but "probably will get married" is talking about a future event.
"with" could be changed to "about"
because people are not gossiping to Patty Hou, but are gossiping about her.
I think there also needs to be a transition or a conjunction between the first part of the sentence and the word "now." For example: " ...but now she is..."
This helps make your sentence smoother.
Talk to you soon!
-Kalsow