throng:
to be or go somewhere in very large numbers
Eg. I hope that thousands of people will throng to see the 2010 Taipei International Flora Exposition(Expo) , which will be held from Novemer 6, 2010 to April 25, 2011.
time-consuming:
Eg. For me, picking some great clothes, such as skirts or shirts, is a very time-consuming matter, but it's worth because my appearance can look more attractive and I'll feel more happier.
I made two sentences for these two terms. Please correct for me if I make any mistakes. Thanks in advance.
Wednesday, March 3, 2010
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Hi Maggie!
ReplyDeleteGood job on your first sentence! It was perfect!
The second sentence has only 3 things that really need to be fixed.
After 'picking' you should add the word 'out'
So it would be 'picking out'
This is to clarify the way 'picking' is being used.
After 'worth' you should also add the word 'it'
I do not know why.
The part 'more happier' should just be 'happier.'
This is because 'happier' = 'more happy' so its like you are saying 'more more happy' which sounds excessive.
Good job though! I really like your sentences!
Smile :)
-Kalsow