Thursday, July 15, 2010

dubios

dubios:

thought not to be positive;not able to be trusted

I am dubious about my previous coworker has another job about predicting someone's future or not.


Hi, KalsowThanks again for giving me suggestions. I correct them as following,


Corrections:I am dubious that my previous coworker has another job as a fortune-teller.

Posted by Maggie at 2:10 AM

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4 comments:

  1. E KalsowJuly 18, 2010 at 4:35 PM

    Hi Maggie,

    I have a couple of suggestions to make this sentence better. Instead of saying a "job about predicting someones future" you could say "job as a fortune-teller." "Fortune-teller" is the word used for someone who predicts other peoples futures.

    Also, after the word "about" you could add "whether" so it would be "about whether." This is because there is "or not" later in the sentence.

    Smile :)
    Kalsow

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  2. MaggieJuly 18, 2010 at 9:49 PM

    Hi, Kalsow

    Thanks again for giving me suggestions. I correct them as following,



    Corrections:

    I am dubious about my previous coworker has another job as a fortune-teller.

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  3. E KalsowJuly 19, 2010 at 8:23 PM

    Hi Maggie!
    Good job! One more thing- try and change "about" to "that."
    -Kalsow :)

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  4. MaggieJuly 20, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    Hi, Kalsow

    As you mentioned, I've corrected it already.

    Thanks for checking it for me.


    Maggie^^

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