1. intestinal distress
make a sentence stressed out
During preparation for the National Examinations, I was stressed out which gave me a serious intestinal distress. My bowel became very uncomfortable after eating just a little bit of food. So I went to see a doctor, and he told me that I was under great pressure. Then I quit to prepare for the exam.
During preparation FOR the National Examinations, I was stressed out which GAVE ME serious intestinal distress. My bowel became very uncomfortable after eating JUST a little bit OF food. So that I went to see a doctor, and he told me that I was under a great pressure.
The final version
Then I left his surgery and stopped preparing for the National Examination because I thought that
I couldn't bear the stress and I needed to take a break and clear my mind for a while. One year later, I started to prepare for
the exam again. Fortunately, I passed it. So far, I have been a civil servant
for more than three years. I am very happy with the outcome.
(from Beees of ESL)
Then I left his office/surgery (choose one - don't use both) and stopped preparing for the National Examination because I thought that I couldn't bear the stress and I needed to take a break and adjust my mind (adjust my mind sounds odd. A typical phrase used by a native English speaker would be 'clear my mind') for a while. One year later, I started to prepare for the exam again. Fortunately, I passed it. So far, I have been a civil servant for more than three years. I am very happy with the outcome.
reference, quit to prepare for the exam
2.Vietnam (pronouce) ESL
pronounce VIETNAM (v-yet-nam)
3. Nervousness, short tempers, frequently, getting sick, forgetfulness and even severe mental problems are all symptoms of stress. Coke, French Potatoes, and hambergurs contain a lot of calross that makes people gain weight. (look up)
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